年英语专业四级写作作文指导:句子连贯性1

1、a)使用相同的语法来表达具有相同功能的句子成分，可运用并列连词and, but或or等。

2、b)正确使用相关连词，如both…and, not … but, not only … but also等。

3、√ The old woman told the little girl,”You are wrong、”

4、We are each responsible for his own jobs、

5、c)一个句子或段落中的人称、时态、语态要始终保持一致。

句子的连贯性：指句子连接贯通，衔接自然。句子不论长短都应环环紧扣，符合语法、逻辑。请注意以下要点：

7、× Wang Lan is not only clever but also she is helpful、

8、√ Wang Lan is not only clever but also helpful、

9、√ If you want to learn a foreign language well, you’d better try to think in it and to speak it as much as possible、

10、2)代词一致：句中代词应在数、性、人称等方面保持一致，或者与它所照应的名词词组在这些方面保持一致。如：

11、√ The old woman told the little girl,”I am wrong、”

12、3)代词与先行词一致：写作时应弄清楚代词究竟指代哪个名词，否则意思不明确，造成模棱两可的感觉。如：

13、We each are responsible for our own jobs、

14、√ I like to go to school on foot I regard it as a kind of physical exercise、

15、× One reason I like to go to school on foot is the physical exercise I get from it、

16、× The old woman told the little girl that she was wrong、

17、1)平行结构：把两个获两个以上意思相近或相对的、地位相当的成分已同意与发行是泛指在一起。其中以下三条规则须加以注意。

18、× If you want to learn a foreign language well, you’d better try to think in it and speak it as much as possible、